Heya, I've redone the first post, I'm working on the second post as we speak, and I'll get to the third probably sometime on Sunday, maybe IDK depends on my schedule and all.
Hopefully the first part is much better, and the second and third are bearable enough to read thourgh.
Thank you AIGD (I'm assuming this is your nickname) for your help.
Edit: I finally got the second post done, took awhile becuase my schedule got thrown into whack by one of my depression things.